The Reflection

Now, I am writing my second body paragraph. Because I changed a lot for my revised draft, I should spend more time to work on my final draft. For the revised draft, I deleted two of my paragraph which are about the summaries of the book and the movie. In the beginning, I just think I should talk about what happened in the book and movie. However, when I began to write my body paragraph, I found I can write about the summaries and analysis together in one paragraph. Also, if I write two paragraphs about the summary, that is too much summary in my paragraph. Therefore, after reading other’s paper, I began to think about how to change my paper to be more interesting and not make people like read the stories. Then, I did not spend too much time to change my grammar mistakes; I deleted two summary paragraphs and add two more body paragraph. Although I’ve already plan how to write this paper, I still did not finish writing it. I think I still should spend more to finish writing my paper. In addition, I think I should go over and over after finishing this paper, because I always very careless and make lots of mistakes such as the grammar. I know that’s very hard for me to fix my grammar and some sentence mistakes, for writing by me. The reason I cannot find the mistakes is I’ve done this paper, I don’t know the mistakes I have in the paper. I think it’s hard for a writer to find the mistakes she has, because if she knows that’s the mistake, she won’t write down that. For this reason, I think I can ask help from my teacher, also my classmates. By the other way, I think I should work on my body paragraph also. I went to the writing center,  the teacher told me I should work more about the connection of the sentence in the body paragraph. As a result, there are lots of sentences are hard to understand for others, I should do more about that. Also, there are some sentences are not belong to that paragraph. Ms. Swift told me I should work more about the deeper things for the movie and the book. In conclusion, I did not finish my paper, But I think I still should work a lot because there are lots of mistakes should I change.